Post by Genesis--Of--Next on Jan 12, 2005 20:03:01 GMT -4
(this is in fanfiction.net format)
MMM_0018: Hey Peoples! This is my first fanfic, and note that it is only chapter one! I AM BEGING YOU TO REVEW! Please? WARNING: This fic contains swearing and will latter on, violence. (Not to mention a kiss hopefully in CH2!) 0041, I also changed some things and added others, so it’s not identical to the first draft you read.
Key for this chapter:
= Jump to a different reality.
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= Time passes
CH1 of Dimension 57…<br>
Carolyn sat on her bed and sighed. Her days consisted of trance, Anime, and school. Not to mention being hooked online half the time. The CD player and played Talla 2XLC. Carolyn thought about how cool it would be to become 0018, or at least meet the original nine. She sighed again as sleep took her…<br>
“I’m going to the store, do you gyes want me to pick up any thing?” 003 called out in to the house. A resounding “No…” and a faint “Where out of rice!” was the answer. She grabbed her coat. Joe and Jet where playing Street Fighter 2 for the game cube. Joe’s character died for properly the twenty-first time that day. “I died again? Why do I keep losing?” Jet looked at him. “ Face it, you absolutely SUCK at this game! But because I feel sorry for you, hit A-X-Down-A.” And nothing happens. “Gez, It’s A-X-Up-Right-A.” 003 said as she walked by. “Noooo! This can’t be happening! You can’t possibly beat me! Argg!” She smiled as she put on her helmet, got on the motorcycle, and went to the store.
Carolyn was surfing the web during her study hall. She was looking up 009 fanfic’s and reviewing them. Her mind wandered to thinking about what would happen if Black Ghost came to take her away…all her memories…she did not want to llse them…<br>
When 003 got back from the store, the beach house was in shambles. The Cyborgs where gone…<br>
The CD player’s volume went all the way up. Moments before Carolyn had felt searing pain and developed a feeling of loss. She also got for some reason an image of the cyborgs. She could not sh ke the feelings.
The rice was forgotten. 003 went inside the house and saw the destruction and signs of battle. A smear of blood here, a weapon blast mark there…the TV where Joe and Jet had be playing was broken and smoking. Tears began to fill her sapphire eyes. Sounds started to come from her room. 003 pushed the door open. There was a long, green animal trapped beneath the cave in roof.
“Argg! Why can’t I make brown?” Keith yelled in frustration. Carolyn and Keith where in art class. “Come on, its last art class before English exams. Shut up about brown or I’ll annoy you with anime!” she growled at him. “Oh, scary.” He rolled his eyes. “What are you going to do? Preach to me about pokemon?” The glare of acid she gave him made him shut up.
The animal tried to move out from underneath, but failed. The roof was too heavy. It turned to 003. “Help me…” It gasped.
During the test the next day, Carolyn’s mind wandered. The dream kept coming back. But last night, she had seen a green dragon with a yellow mane and brown antler horns. A Ying Long. What did a Ying long have to do with the cyborgs?
The animal struggled again under the debris. “Please…” it begged. “I won’t hurt you…” 003 cautiously pulled the roofing away. The animal was badly injured. “Who…What are you?” she asked. It stood up and looked at her with livid purple eyes. “I am a Ying Long, or a Chinese dragon. My name is Shen. I came to warn you, but I came too late…” He collapsed and 003 gasped at what she saw. The dragon was a maze of slash marks. “Ouch, heh, I probably look really messed up…” Shen murmured. She picked him up and gently slung him over her shoulders. “The infirmary’s not far...”<br>
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Shen woke up half an hour later in the infirmary, all wrapped up like a mummy in bandages. He sat up and met 003’s gaze. “You’re probably wondering what I’m doing here…” She nodded. “Let me explain alternate dimensions and realties…”
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“So, there are other versions of the same reality? Different events and different out comes” 003’s eyes grew wide. “And they where all sent to different Black Ghost realties?” Shen nodded. “All but one. One of them escaped in to a neutral reality…but it might not be any more.”<br>“Might not?”<br>“Some times when some thing happens, some thing earth shattering, in another reality, the time speeds up or slows down, and things can change very quickly.”<br>“What did the one who got away look like?” She asked.
“Uh…Dark hair…red eyes—“ 003 gave a squeal of delight, picked up Shen and swung him around the room. “Ouch! Can you please put me down?”<br>
Dave turned left, meaning the long way home for Carolyn. Good. More time for contemplation of meaningless things. She looked at the scenery rushing by and a name came to her. Shen. Shen? Who…or what the hell was Shen?
So, what do you think? Constructive criticism accepted! CH2 on the way! Please, don’t flame me! =@.@= Oh yeah, I do not own the show Cyborg 009 but I do own Shen and me. But I am willing to accept the rights if you give them to me!